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popatemyheart1994

  • Other Re: Presents for YWS (Summer Music Mixes)

    Great taste in music. I loved nearly all of these :)

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Victoria Victimised

    I gnore the top comment. Do not ellaborate on this because I think that you will lose the poem's great mystery. Unveiling only what we need to know to create ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl

    You handled a sensitive topic, often associated with sleaze and candid humour, very surprisingly beautiful. I love the repetition of "love". I loved this most definitley. Well done and keep ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I'd like to write a poem

    Okay so the topic was a little bit cliche, but so is everything else nowadays so I wouldn't care too much. Nice structure, I like your style. Fluid expressive writing. ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stuck in a Dead F**k

    Stuck in a Dead Fuck. Put it down to bad luck. Pull it, make it grow , Drive it fast , make it slow . Give me reason, Give me ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rainy Day

    I liked this really presented a strong image of a rainy day in my mind and I loved the lack of punctuation and the weird, drippy structure. I love it ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bone Queen

    I didn't get this at all. Just an image of a skeletal, corpse. What were you aiming for with this poem? This was not clear as I was reading the ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: We are the same/ something changed

    We are the same/ something changed A shadow falls, it lights up your face Lovers play recklessly in cold embrace We could not predict or foretell The fires burning, burned ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Shine On, Rosaleen

    OMG. How is this not a featured poem? I loved every single stanza, the cynical tone of it. I had to read it twice. Is rosaleen some kind of Las ...

    May 27, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The gay guy in the bar

    I have to be honest, I date both guys and girls and I found this offensive myself. "butt-fucking" and saying "I'm here and I'm queer" is really not what gay ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Penny Lane

    Oh no, haha it says I get the bus to Penny Lane, I'm not actually on the bus as the poem progresses. I'm on Penny Lane. Thanks for your review!! ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Penny Lane

    I love to walk down Penny Lane Because I enjoy the pain Of seeing you walk by with a distant hate, like a dead mate. On the sidewalk I stop ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    I actually love this. The word "original" is thrown around this website a lot. I really , one hundred percent feel that this is worthy of that title! It is ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: picking oranges in Westminster, CA

    You are the best poet on this entire website. I'm not even joking. You inspired me :D

    May 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Animal

    So I read the poem and watched you read it out loud to make sure I got it from both angles and I have to say bravo, really. I found ...

    Apr 25, 2011


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote