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Re: Presents for YWS (Summer Music Mixes)
Great taste in music. I loved nearly all of these :)
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Victoria Victimised
I gnore the top comment. Do not ellaborate on this because I think that you will lose the poem's great mystery. Unveiling only what we need to know to create ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl
You handled a sensitive topic, often associated with sleaze and candid humour, very surprisingly beautiful. I love the repetition of "love". I loved this most definitley. Well done and keep ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: I'd like to write a poem
Okay so the topic was a little bit cliche, but so is everything else nowadays so I wouldn't care too much. Nice structure, I like your style. Fluid expressive writing. ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Stuck in a Dead F**k
Stuck in a Dead Fuck. Put it down to bad luck. Pull it, make it grow , Drive it fast , make it slow . Give me reason, Give me ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Rainy Day
I liked this really presented a strong image of a rainy day in my mind and I loved the lack of punctuation and the weird, drippy structure. I love it ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Bone Queen
I didn't get this at all. Just an image of a skeletal, corpse. What were you aiming for with this poem? This was not clear as I was reading the ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: We are the same/ something changed
We are the same/ something changed A shadow falls, it lights up your face Lovers play recklessly in cold embrace We could not predict or foretell The fires burning, burned ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Shine On, Rosaleen
OMG. How is this not a featured poem? I loved every single stanza, the cynical tone of it. I had to read it twice. Is rosaleen some kind of Las ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: The gay guy in the bar
I have to be honest, I date both guys and girls and I found this offensive myself. "butt-fucking" and saying "I'm here and I'm queer" is really not what gay ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Penny Lane
Oh no, haha it says I get the bus to Penny Lane, I'm not actually on the bus as the poem progresses. I'm on Penny Lane. Thanks for your review!! ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Penny Lane
I love to walk down Penny Lane Because I enjoy the pain Of seeing you walk by with a distant hate, like a dead mate. On the sidewalk I stop ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
I actually love this. The word "original" is thrown around this website a lot. I really , one hundred percent feel that this is worthy of that title! It is ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: picking oranges in Westminster, CA
You are the best poet on this entire website. I'm not even joking. You inspired me :D
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Animal
So I read the poem and watched you read it out loud to make sure I got it from both angles and I have to say bravo, really. I found ...
Apr 25, 2011
