popatemyheart1994

I am the origin In this white tub life begins. It swims in this silvery pool of thought Where nothing ever happened to me; no one ever loved me Regrets ...

I know you posted on my wall months ago but I have literally only just logged in, sorry!! First off, I love this poem. I read alot of Sylvia Plath ...

I love this! I thought the imagry was great and I really like the subject. You had a smart choice of language here and I especially loved the "mourning bird" ...

I loved this! The imagry and metaphors used were very high quality. So proud of you!!! I expect to see more. If I didn't know you I'd still get exactly ...

Open me up like a birthday card. Head cocked to side, tongue rolled out As their latex fingers grope for a tainted object. Underneath my marble skin, and bone. Deep ...

It was more than I could stand. From the girl I loved, I let her hold my hand. Let her treat me like second best. She put me last, so ...

I am hybrid, leather studded human And born again with the sunset of The new age in my eyes. I am too far gone from you now. Beyond death, towards ...

I F*****G LOVED THIS! Like a sex and the city but for teenagers it felt like. So candid and honest. Like one of the other reviewers said..you rock!

I liked this, our writing style is intriguing but I feel that this poem was lacking something. It just didn't feel right to me. Meh, just my own personal opinion ...

I didn't really understand this or get what meaning you were trying to convey. What are you trying to get across to the reader? It just seemed like a bunch ...

If you really knew me, Would you be afraid? If you really knew me, Would you be ashamed? I don’t want to lie, So I won’t talk to you. Love ...

The Beast By TheCodex My feet pound the grass under my cleat

You are an amazing writer.

Jessa this is truly beautiful. Tragic, but beautiful. You tackled a very controversial and hard subject head on with great success. I thought the detail you paid to imagry and ...

To the little boy I used to know, I know the pain, you will never show. Time passes and people change, Yet inside I remain the same. Telling lies to ...