polkadottiger2

Alright, great story! I love the ending: It's unexpected, because even though her fate is determined from the beginning, the reader expects a struggle of some sort, or at least ...

Alright, I love your poem overall! It's refreshing to read something this well written. I love your word choice, and for the most part, the flow is great as well. ...

Alright, so I noticed a few grammar mistakes: David looked at it but, it didn’t feel right. The comma should be after "it" and before "but" (David looked at it, ...

Alright, so I noticed a few grammar mistakes: David looked at it but, it didn’t feel right. The comma should be afterit and before but (David looked at it, but ...

I love the flow of this poem! I know from experience that it is hard to make a poem, especially on this subject, interesting, and to keep your readers attention, ...

As always, great story. I LOVE how you portray your characters. They have very distinct personalities and they stick to those personalities throughout the story. I think you did a ...

The story is awesome, I love how you describe your characters! For example, we learn about Kei's personality from some of kiba's comments instead of just from usual descriptions. Then ...

The story is great, although I do have a few tips grammar wise. "But for Annabel it was nothing but the truth" There should be a comma after Annabe here, ...

Chp.3 It didn't take long after Pierce left for everyone to return to their usual routines, and Scarlet was left to do the same. She couldn't get Pierce off of ...

Loved the story. Your language is great and it all flows very well. It is also quite vague, yet in a good way. It leaves the reader space to imagine ...

Prologue He found her sitting hunched in an alley, bloodied and bruised. She didn't notice as he approached. She didn't protest as he lifted her off of the hard concrete ...

Alright, loved the story! I honestly couldn't find anything that I would change, although I don't know much about Naruto. I like how you jump right into things in the ...

Hey i loved the story you have really good description, the only thing i noticed was that twice in the story you wrote that Murdoc "Was amused by her boldness" ...

I love the story. I think in the beginning it takes a little while to get into the story but once it really started it had a good flow. I ...

Thank you for the review :) I will edit the "theres"