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Re: Outside, Inside
This is exactly how I feel about my writing. I agree, a blank sheet of paper looks very scary at first, and if no words come to mind, I just ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Writer's block. Help?
So basically, I'm out of ideas. The words I'm writing don't look or sound right. All my ideas seem unoriginal and dull. I have no idea how to cope:( Do ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Photography
Hey, I really like these two, especially the first one. Looks like a wallpaper, and it is beautiful:) And the second one is like old-style and out of focus (purposefully), ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mike
Actually, this isn't nothing, I liked it. It has a huge contrast from despair of separation to acceptance (to an extent) I really like the first paragraph. The ones that ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Battle of the Hopeless (Part 2 - Felix)
See the novel : Battle Of The Hopeless for this please:)
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
Hey! Yay, I'm here again, once again enjoying this! Here come nitpicks: Eagar - you mean eager?:) I like this, you kept the same detailed descriptions of your surroundings and ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Good
Hey:) I really like this! I like how you compare the opposites, but in the end, it all adds up to "Life Is Good", because there needs to be a ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: If I could
Chorus: If I could take all your pain If I could make you stay If I could wash away your vain Then I would If I wanted to lose If ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Abstract Poem
This isn't about the bushes or the wind or the rain. I tried to express my feelings through these natural (and unnatural) things, it's all metaphors out here. But let's ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Suburb
Hey:) I wanted to keep going onto the next piece, but as soon as I read the first four lines, it captured my attention:) This already means this is good.... ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
Hi:) Gosh, people notice your grammar mistakes before me again, so I don't want to repeat myself here. But, wow, Russian people are evil!!:D But true, I remember my great-grandmother ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
Hey:) So, I'm really excited about this, it definitely got me hooked:) You've chosen an interesting subject to write about - an NKVD camp, even though you should mention what ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Battle of the Hopeless (Part 1 - Delem)
Thank you:) I have edited it a bit more now, I hope this will improve it. Don't mind the apostrophe, my laptop doesn't want to make it a normal one ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The story of your life
Wow, I've never seen something like this before. But it's pretty cool, even if it kind of made me feel insignificant and boring:D And, there are indeed, a lot of ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
Totally agree with you. I am so against stereotyping, it really annoys me when people do it. For example, I'm Russian, and as soon as people know it they start ...
Jun 14, 2011
