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Hey:) I liked this. I like your use of language - it is heavy, but filled with emotions, I don't see that around a lot. No grammar mistakes I could ...

Oooohhhhh, creepy!! But so good! There are no grammar mistakes I could spot, here is the bit I really liked: Then I carved her, Into the shape of my curse. ...

Hey:) This was amazing, I really liked how you carried out the emotions in here. Very believable, and beautiful imagery. Here come the nitpicks:D I can still see you- you ...

This has also been published before, but it is polished up and re-edited now, so hopefully way better than before:D Enjoy! Felix I have always wondered what the outside world ...

I have posted this before, so if you don't want to review it - then go on to the other chapters! But a review is always appreciated:) Delem I honestly ...

Hey there:) This is one of the first poems with a political view I have seen in a while, and I must say, it's good. In a way that if ...

I really like the Old English "thy"'s. It is interesting, and can be interpreted in different ways. I think you need a comma after the second Right in the third ...

It was interesting to write something from a point-of-view, and I guess it seems to work! So, thank you;)

Ahhh this was amazing. A very intriguing, and captivating read. Really is "sweet revenge"... I really like the first paragraphs where you describe what the hunter is like. Some nitpicking: ...

Hey:) Well, I think the legs do look quite strange, and it would have been better if the boots were black. But overall, it's a nice picture, better than what ...

I know exactly how you feel. I have not seen the movie, but there's nothing more upsetting that seeing a badly done movie. I watch a lot of movies, but ...

Oh my god, this is really good! I loved the fact that the class is kind of 'studying' you, it's very original, and very true as well, I think it ...

Hey:) Oh, how depressing, oh how good!:D Only one thing: I really doubt that a torture method would be putting their heads into hot bleach. That's a bit too much ...

And here it is, my creepy chase scene re-edited and made even better (hopefully). Care to take a look? P.S Thanks to everyone who reviewed this, you guys helped immensely ...

Hey, how have you been? I really like this, except some little pointers: "I could send letters to the king." - didn't quite understand that metaphor...:) "It's all of you" ...