poketheprincess

yeah that was...interesting...now why did the daddy have a hillbilly accent? ooh but i did like billy. he reminds me of the cricket from mulan...what you were going for judging ...

oh gosh thanks for that!!! im some what dyslexic and i hadn't caught that!!

1692 in a small colony in America --------------------------------- Jack sat in the tall grass outside his house, where the river ran through. He stood up in the milky moonlight when ...

OMG!!! i loved it!!! especially since you made Bella the whiner that she is!! XP i really wanna know what happened to Ron though? he disappeared, which depressed me. Or ...

HAHA!! A+!!!! i love how you made superman the only smart one. Because lets be honest, he is. And i have to wonder how large this booger is to have ...

wow. this is really good. Only, why is the tear on the left black? the only thing i could come up for my self was that she was wearing mascara ...

I thought you did really well with the description and setting the scene. The rhyming was really good, too. sorry, i dont have much to say other than that XP

At first i was confused to whether or not there was a rhyming scheme (until i read a little further). It's very good, though.

my heart only breaks as she spreads her poisoned lie its first of many

Lavender was asleep on the ground, her head resting on Lunar's back. The werewolf had taken his wolf form to please the child, and keep her warm in the cold ...