poetrymylovely

~ I know it's pretty long so please bear with me here. :) I write to you, this apologetic plea, for you to come forever back to me. I miss ...

It's a little away from my usual form of writing but I decided to give it a go. Please comment and hope you like it. :) I’m slowly losing control, ...

Wow! Just wow! That was an amazing poem. It was very visual, and painted the scene perfectly! I felt lost in the dance floor as I lost myself in the ...

Hey! :) First of all let me just say that i loved this poem! It was very descriptive, however short. Even though this was a great poem all in all ...

Okay so this was all in all good but there were a few things that seemed like they needed adjustment. Running Away Running away to find a place of

I sit here in silence. Bloody, beaten and bludgeoned. Naked, and violated and without another Here to save me from my death. I sit here in silence. Ready to take ...

I thought this was a marvelous piece! The detail and description, however short, was magnificent. I especially enjoyed when you wrote "He needs this more than air, than water, his ...

I absolutely loved this! It was right down my alley for favorite type of writing! It was deliciously gruesome and the words delicately placed. The spelling was a little off ...

I thought this was a really good poem. You used great description and it was very thorough. Reading it made me think of all different types of circumstances like that ...

Hey this one I'm not sure about with the wording. Please point anything out if you feel it doesn't fit. :smt003 Take your hand, And rest it there. Upon my ...

It was good. I just have a few suggestions... I wanna curl up like a cat around you and just hold you tight.... ~ Here I would put a comma ...

I thought it was good but there are a few things that were a little bit off. All of my comments have already been pointed out so I won't bother ...

It was good but a little confusing. We gaze into the depths, but not seeing past our appearance on the service. ~ here I think you meant to say "surface" ...

Hi- I think this is a great poem I just have one little issue with your wording. You seem to be very repetative in using the word her . I ...

I was kind-of lost in this. I thought you put good word choice and placement in it.