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Wow this was the best thing i have seen online in a long while. I'm really impressed with the descriptions and the story's plot itself was very creative. you should ...

It was mid September, too hot for jackets and too cold for t-shirts. My dad and I were going to the local super-mart to pick up fishing supplies for the ...

Actually the girl is an American and also a murderer.

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ashleylee, Thank you for the feedback. The story should have gone into the non fiction category and I should have re read it a few more times. The paragraph thing ...

I like how it is vague. it leaves more to the imagination. if it was a longer story then i would want more clarity but for the size it is ...

I liked it alot! very put together and orderly. I remember my teacher making us do these in grade school mine really sucked compared to yours.

It was mid September too hot for jackets and too cold for t-shirts. My dad and I were going to the local super-mart to pick up fishing supplies for the ...

This is ridiculous. can someone please tell me how to edit this so I can fix it please.

How do I edit something once I post it?

I took this from my window with my moms camera if i took it with mine it would have been better.

This was really a great story. I have always liked storys people post like beats all the cliched roamantic storys haha.