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Um.. OK well maybe you shouldn't be so down on yourself. Now that I said that (its kind of required) this drawing isn't really that great. the girl doesn't even ...

Another great chapter by Ashley. Now we know who and what the mysterious William is and what this story will be about. I could tell that you like the William ...

Right now I'm mainly reading the Sea Wolf by Jack London. It is awesome because it is adventurous/ romantic/ violent/ and because Jack London wrote it. Also reading Stalk and ...

Thanks for the review chichi I went through and changed a few things to protect the innocent. The ending with the beginning thing was a spur of the moment thing ...

Wow, for such a silly topic I'm surprised you were able to make an actual poem from it. I liked this poem because it made sense and wasn't just words ...

Well I am definitely no artist like you but if I had to suggest something to make this better I would say to.... Try and find a way to make ...

Thanks you guys I am going to try to re word this whole thing to not make it so... um.. factual? I guess and when I type the rest up ...

This is the prologue of the new novel Ive been writing for around a month. It is also the first chapter and the second chapter is were the actual story ...

Even though I didn't dear cross paths with him, I could see his face. Other than this and the two things Mike B pointed out I didn't find anything that ...

I updated the story and fixed a few errors I found. Please tell me what you think!

I thought this was a truly great story!That is saying something because i usually hate any romantic stories. What made me like this story was that it is mysterious because ...

I can tell this is from a great writer because when I read the prompt i thought, "this is going to suck". But it didn't at all. It was a ...

Well I think this is slightly funny so good job. Dont be afraid to cuss just put it as pg 13 believe me it will be better than f&*k throughout ...

With this girl around I'm glad I'm a guy. It was well constructed and pretty much to the point. What else is there to say. Good job

The story is very historically accurate and I congratulate you on that. It was slightly wishy washy. I mean a soldier wouldn't get so excited about writing he is exhausted ...