pink_09

This is my first story on here please tell me how it sound to you this will also be my senior project which is to finish a story well here ...

I loved the piece, it can go far, you have some gramatical errors, but overall i had good details that i saw it kept my attention

This story was ok at first i was kind of confused, you have a little gramatical errors but not that many, just work on the flow, the flowing is kind ...

hey im new here so im trying to get the hang of it do we put out writings on here and somebody critque them