piepiemann22

I was born, lived, than died.

Lets see, out of them all, ADD MORE DETAIL.

Thanks, now that I think about it i do that in my poetry. Thank you for the help.

Hey that's a good idea, I'll try it.

Me, I write in both. You have to decide what sounds best. Past is a little easier, but preasnt gives you a first hand experiance.

well, I had the same problem. Should he live or die? You choice. If your leaning twords death you should make end in his character. Have him die doing something ...

Not a good idea if the sword is that important. Try having it represent the character. If he/she is elegent, sweet, and trust worthy, have the blade the same way. ...