piepiemann22

It was a bit short, but a good place to stop in my opinion. My major problem is we have no idea what the characters look like. It's good to ...

Oh well, somethings have to be sacraficed.

Hey man, welcome to the site. I'm a fantasy writer, so if ever need something feel free to ask. You'll find we're all friendly here and very helpful. ~Mr. Pie.

You have a point, but what I added my make it better ^_^

Thanks, let me see if I can gather anything else from the tree outside my window, that's inspiration for ya :)

Yeah, let me see what i can do with it and maybe put a back to it. Hmm...

Sano and Geomana were silent as they sipped their tea, Sano sighed and stared at the liquid inside his cup. Geomana noticed and asked, "Sano, is something wrong?" She put ...

(Need Help!) I lay awake, I can't sleep. My eyes get heavy, When I'm ready to slip I hear a sound, but don't know if it's real. I see a ...

(It's been a while since I've written poetry so I could use some help.) Loss is difficult, no one said it would be easy. fading of mind and body, can ...

Let me think and I'll try posting.

(Well, I'm off for the night. See you tomarrow,)

(Not sure. DFA knows his character better than us, HMMMM...)

(Anything else?)

(I was leaning that way, but they just met. Maybe sart out with the hint they like each other, then it shows it self later on?)

(Is there going to be one or not? Have a brother sister feel? Eventully break away and stay away frome each other for what ever reason?)