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It's just the format of the thing I want to make sure is good.

(Is this thing dead, or are you guys just stuck?)

A link. The poem was posted the other day, but I had a bad feeling about it. I had a poem that was critiqued once, and it wasn't helpful. You ...

I read it and liked it. The problem is I'm tired and can't think strait. I'll reread it tomarrow and give you a better reply. One major thing is characterization. ...

A link. The poem was posted the other day, but I had a bad feeling about it. I had a poem that was critiqued once, and it wasn't helpful. You ...

In a way I like it. I get the idea behind it, but it needs some work all the same. 1) I go to the doctor and her says I'm ...

Myrth watched as Nyugan exited the cave. With a sigh he looked up at the sky. This is taking a tool at everyone. He looked everyone over and sighed again, ...

(I'm in) Name- Light Yagami(From Death Note. He rules.) Age- 19 Appearance- Personality- A thinker. He tends to think things through and notice that that others don't. He as great ...

Jason listened as the people around him continued to chatter randomly. Jason started to get really annoyed. What should I do? Maybe introductions are in order huh? Maybe, but... alright, ...

(I'm doing this for English, but I'm not sure it's right. Could someone help me out.) Formal Outline Introduction Introduction:(Thesis) Switching from Europe to America during the 1950’s abstract ex

Myrth chukled, "A fine trick my friend. I've seen a lot of things in my travels, but that was quiet impressive." "Thank you. May I ask why you're here?" Myrth ...

Morning came early the day after the storm. Hyral had given the girl his cloak for the night, but he couldn't sleep. he kept feeling like there was something out ...

(Here's Jason's friends profile.) Name- Ryan Marks Age- 27 Appearance- Personality- Very easily amazed in the terms of spirituality. Can sometimes be a little too excited. Even so he knows ...

(Spirits can talk to who ever.) Jason simply sighed. All this babbling was getting them no where. Suddenly a shiver ran down his spine. He turned to see another girl ...

(I thought my charater was in the cave with TN's? I'm so confused.)