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Silver watched as the remains of the demon faded into nothingness. He wrapped his chain around his wrist as it turned back to normal. he heard someone behind him and ...

(I don't think I made this clear, but Morning and Shadow are on the same side, just different branches of Demonic. It's true they don't get along, but I felt ...

Name- Kevin "Silver" Niles. Age- 21 Gender- Male Appearance- Personality- In one word, Dedicated. He believes in his cause and would do anything for it and his allies. He's a ...

(Haven't done one of these in a while so I thought I'd give it a shot.) ~Story Many people live their lives without much knowledge of the spiritual world. Heaven ...

Alex let out a curse as someone rammed into him sending him back. He looked to see a young man begging to stand, "Watch it kid!" "Hey, don't call me ...

Whispered, and blurted out, are two I use sometimes. Other than that all of the above.

8/10 interesting, but plain at the same time.

I like it a lot. It flows easy and the rhyme scheme fits just fine. I did see a few things though. In the sixth line I feel it doesn't ...

Alex stood slowly as thoughts rushed into his head. He remembered Brick, the gym, and all the trainees. He shock his head to make the memories disappear, but they didn't. ...

name- Alex Valorum Age- 20 gender- Male appearance- Alex stands around 5'11 and his rather filled out nicely. His hair his thick and brown like a mop a top his ...

The beach for sure. It's where I get some of my best inspiration.

(I shall be filming this movie with a large group of friends. I'll be sure to keep anyone interested up to date.) (Page 1) Fade in to space background A ...

A seasons change That brings new winds Also brings new minds. For all of this time And for all that has happened So much has been left unsaid. I sit ...

9/10 Sephiroth is good, but Cloud is better, sorry.

I don't know what they mean by visual, but I know what literary elements. Literary elements are specific terms. Ex) Protagonist, setting, empathy, action, conflict, etc. What it's asking you ...