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Sano ran for the woods. He was no good there. After trying to fight a dragon he barley took down he decided he had over stayed his welcome. As he ...

Sano ran for the woods. He was no good there. After trying to fight a dragon he barley took down he decided he had over stayed his welcome. As he ...

Name- Yakov Age- 21 Race- Human Appearance- Country- Eltar Personality- He honors the code of the knights and uses it as his moral code. He doesnt follow them to the ...

This costs a lot so I hope you guys like it. (Forgotten Truths) The world of Algen has had many ages, both dark and light. Currently the world is fragile. ...

Did you think she would care, or were you bored?

Nate, you just made a friend of mine feel a lot better. He's in Italics. Thanks a lot man, that is so a weight off of my shoulders. I'm glad ...

Only if the craker was an animal. What would you do if you met a jaboo?

I like this one as much as I like the other. In terms of this one your imagery is 100 times better. Good Job! Also, the way you broke up ...

I really liked the poem. The idea and the way you showed it was great. The only thing I see wrong is in your structure. Your line breaks seem off ...

Thanks, but what I ment was that poetry only gets a few reviews. I for one usually want a few more. Still, you may be right. I guess I'm just ...

I've notice that poetry never really gets reviewed that much. Give me a link to a poem old or new and I'll read it. Even if its been reviewed a ...

Name- Gilthanas Age- 120 Race- Elf Fairies/ Elves- Elves Appearance- Look below Powers- Slight magic, but nothing to great. Personality- He either trusts you or he doesn't, there is no ...

I like the idea that you're shooting for, but you didn't hit the bulls-eye. The poem is very sketchy and the idea was hard to grasp at first. Give us ...

Welcome and I hope you enjoy the site. I myself am very religious. It's nice to see I'm not the only one with faith in him. If you ever need ...

Sano smiled a little at the gesture the young elf was making. He had seen a lot in his shorts years of services. He stood up and walked over to ...