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Dude, the color kicks butt man. Wicked job. lol. This made my morning:)

Over all I liked it, but I'm going to point something out that always gets under my skin and not everyone does. Adding punctuation to their piece of writing. I ...

9/10 for the cause.

Name: Johnathan Scott Appearance: Who they are:(friend/enemy/teacher) Favorite teacher. Their relation with each of the girl: He is the girls global history teacher. he's an understanding guy who fini

As Anthony past the cafeteria he decided to grab something to drink before heading to gym for a little track practice. He decided to go in the back door, but ...

I'm still in. Bring in my character and I'll start posting ok.

Better, better, but it still needs a bit of work, but not much. The flow was a little off throughout the whole thing. Maybe reread the thing as a whole ...

Over all, I very nice poem, but nothing is ever perfect. I only noticed a few thing though, so don't worry. This seems to always happen with new members and ...

Kenshin watches as group of hunters try to pull themselves together. He steps out into the light and immediately as a gun to his face, but his sword is to ...

I meant no offence. Just tried to correct what I saw was wrong. If this is suppose to be someone thinking while day dreaming, maybe make that a bit more ...

(I'm finally coming back in. Just a few questions. Where is everbody. Building, forest, running. I get that and I can bring myself in.)

Lets see, I thought it was nice, but it needs a lot of work all the same. I'll point out what I think can be fixed. 1) Idea: Your poem ...

My goal is the 1,500 mark. Congrats to you, and it's time for me to GO!

Well, this is, like, his forth year right? Good job buddy, your a man now. They grow up so fast. :cry:

Name: Anthony (Tony) Delia Age: 16 Appearance: School Year: 2ND (10 grade) Group: He's a combination of nerds and popular. He's a good track runner when it comes to short ...