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You seem to write poety the way I do in some sense. At least this piece. you speak from the way you feel. though you make a lot better poem ...

If your turning this into a story then I realy like it. It makes sense that way. If not then okay, keep brainstorming ideas.

I shall never sleep, nor awaken. Forever in my soul. My heart is bound and my love is free. Forever in my soul. To this day I love you, and ...

A lust for power and a yearning for freedom, the sides of soul collide. Choose your own path in life let it feed from your soul. Forever light, or forever ...

Nicely done. This sounds better as a chapter 1 than a prolouge anyway. keep up the good wok.

Nicely done. You left the reader gueesing to what just happened and you gave only the info you needed. Keep righting

I am a fan of Eregon myself. I belive this (poem) is exelent. It truely grasped the point you made. Keep up the good work.

Please read and edit :) Elemental: The Warrior of Wind. Chapter 1 "A book with a lock? Why did my father have something like this laying around?" The boy dusts ...

Telling us things isn't bad, but you did go a little over board. I realy like the fact you put alot into the world. The Panthwar cat people was a ...

Dude, I'm your friend, now trust me GET WRITING!

I only had to read a little bit, but so far so good. Keep going. when I have time I would like to read the rest.

Darkness shall grow, binding the heart and engulfing the soul. All light shall fade all hope is lost. But within the darkness an endless shadow, life shall endure. If the ...

nice but what happens before then