piepiemann22

hello, it's nice to meet you.

"Shakes his head" this is all to pointless, run away.

well, it's nice to meet you

well, I had the same problem. Should he live or die? You choice. If your leaning twords death you should make end in his character. Have him die doing something ...

First of all and add period, comas, things like that, then I will return

To tell you the truth I don't know any poets or poetry other than what I've read on this sight, so I'll have to say myself

It's nice to see your work. In the thrird stanza is is "satrs" suposed to be stars? Other then that a very nice poem. Can't wait to see what else ...

A shadow once feared is gone. Light begins to shine through the dark. Hope is restored, freedom is given, life begins, with the warmth of the heart.

Go easy, it's my first time rhyming :) An unsettled mind, and a restless heart. You are thrown against the wall, with no way out. Where do you go, who ...

Welcome and good luck. Ask me if you have any questions, I'll do my best.

Names piepiemann22, or big T. For a long time I've asked myself a simple yet complex question. Do you fallow your heart, your to you rely on the mind for ...

I like it. I doesn't seem to have a deeper meaning, but it's clear that you put a lot of time into this.

"You have a point miss. Aro, do you have anymore information on who she is?" Just then he got a bad feeling about something.

"Aro, what are you doing. Try to explain things first. Then we can decide what to do next."

"Stalking, now don't jump to conclusions miss. I simply saw your fire smoke and went to investigate. These are uneasy times so none of us can be to carful," Said ...