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The next day Kaldore looked as the sargent of the Romens traind his men. His moves were dirty, but effective. profe that he had been in many battles. "Your the ...

Sailing off to victory. 9/10

I think it's good. The flow is well put and the depth, the very heart of the poem is amazing. You may be part of it. You never know.

If it's okay I would like to make another character.

Cedrick was sitting at lunch alone. His table by the window he stared out and thought. "Hello Cedrick." He turned to see a boy his age standing there, "Ryan."

Kaldore watched as the massive troll sweeped through the lower city. The he saw it. The Romans, those of his country. Those you destroied his life.

I think I'll make an evil person. Name- Kala Hair- Red Clothes- black robe Wepon- Short sword and rod Personality- Crude sense of humor, loves it when other people are ...

alright.

1. creative class 2. Math- same as Gray 3. power control every other day, study hall the other. 4. using your powers- with Kage 5. lunch 6. english 7. P.E. ...

Okay

yay,but the town was destroyed, now what?

This poem was good. unfortuently we can't alway's be nicy nice. First, stanzas may be usefull here. You don't have to break it up, but it's an idea. Here's my ...

Cedrick watched as gray drolled over Marrisa. He felt bad for him. They may like eachother, but she seems like she's pulling him in.

Resting in the main hall with some of his men Kaldore was uneasy. War was not yet upon them and the city was peaceful, but he had a bad feeling. ...

Broher, yes i may have an idea. We travel looking for him till he finds us. Matt, we need to talk on the bus.