piepiemann22

Well, romantic fiction I think. Maybe someone trying to get the one they love for another? That Which we Serve

Cedrick was standing outside when the boy he healed came out. "You have an interesting power." The boy spun aroung, "How so?" Blood began ossing from his hands, "your alot ...

Alright, give me a second.

You weep, you cry, love is lost, so now you morn. The door is shut, you locked yourself in. fearing that you hate, another broken heart. I found the key, ...

Okay, over all it is good, i like it. But What must it be like to do whatever you want? Without the constant murmur of people telling you, you can't? ...

Adding on to what she said the rhyme over all could be taken out. You may find it easie. Second, the first line, is await awake. If so now you ...

Personaly, I like it. You capture true feeling in this piece. One thing though, the rhyme in the first stanza dives the rytheme of a bit. Fix that and you're ...

Zelles and company headed toward town. There were a few men outside the walls stabbing corpses to make sure the wolves were dead. A soldier stopped them "You, you helped ...

Cedrick was sitting in the nurses office as a boy was brought in. He had a scar on his chest. "what happened?" The nuse turned, "Spike." Cedrick sighed. Then a ...

I see, it makes sense. Wow, Chris said something smart.

I'm stomped, any idea's on how to cntinue?

That happened to me. I just posted the poem WHO WE ARE and it didn't show up either.

Lets see, out of them all, ADD MORE DETAIL.

7/10 Do I understand? :?

I lose myself to those I hate. Lost in the endless shadow. I stretch and dig to deep. who am I? Those who know don't answer, others do not care. ...