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Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
My wrist hurt after only seconds of being yanked behind her. We turned so many corners; I thought that I’d end up with a concussion if she let my wrist ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: The Photograph
I was confused (no surprise there :) ) at some parts, but I like the descriptions.
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
10/10 I love it
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
While I ran, I tried to concentrate harder, trying to find the trouble before it happened. It was when I saw Colt reach down and help up a smaller girl. ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Desperate for your love
AMEN!!!!! I love this poem girl! It gives people visualization of the love Christ has for us.
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
It was so strange, being able to run. Yet it was all I wanted do. Someone had burst into the room and torn all of the cages doors off of ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Shadow Wing
please critique :)
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Shadow Wing
Prologue----part one(for your convenience) Birds flew out of the trees, disturbed by the world below. A low cursing echoed throughout the forest. The thick green leaves blocked most of the ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
Stella: I heard the racket around me, the Max was back. I shifted slightly in my cage, which was still all-too-small for me and every other mutant in this…place. Colt ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
***YAY!! Love the books*** (i'm a little late tho) Name: Stella Age: 14 Characteristics: white hair and reddish pinkish eyes (albino), pure white wings. Personality: extremely quiet, observes from the
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Once Upon A Time
I like it. its easy to relate to. I think this musical is worth writing. :)
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: The Girl I Met Today
LUUUUUUVV it!
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: On different wings: a naruto fanfiction
This is a Naruto fic, la- duh, anyway, review please :D [pre] Chapter one, part one--- Avari tightened the knot that held the headband on her arm and swept her ...
Feb 14, 2008
