phantom_blackfire_wings

**sorry this is so short** [Stella] I thought about trying to find some more food, but abandoned the idea when I sat down at the trunk of a tree. It ...

Chapter 2----A FREAKNING Unicorn I can already see the pained looks of my parents behind that mirror-thingy. But they raised me to tell the truth so…here I go. Yes, at ...

[Stella] I watched Mayze lay her head down on ZT and suppressed a smile. My ribs hurt, but the bruise would go away soon. She fell asleep almost immediately. I ...

okey dokey...(did I spell those right?) Now I'm less confused. WAY less confused. Thanks. :D Risa

You really shouldn't copy from Twilght. You have the skills, but the originality isn't there, Risa

I loved it! I was hooked. Your characters: I got Agatha's attitude, but i don't know what to think of Kel. Keep writing, Risa

I also say welcome. I tried to read this, i really did, but you should put more space between the paragraphs, then PM me so I can read it. Okay? ...

***Okay, Colt is problably with us, one the ground. you decide***

I liked it, but Suzanne is right. This poem is cliche. this sort of poem is done too many times, which kind of makes me sad because that means a ...

This reminds me of what happens to a lot people, in fact, all people. Change. I don't know if that's what you had in mind, but i really like this. ...

[Stella] I noticed the shifty glances they gave Reed. Something had happened while I’d been gone. I’m sure the confusion was written all over my face even though my eyes ...

1. I liked it and would definetly read more 2. I agree with 1dering at stars; I like the vaugeness. 3. Most things start out confusing, thats why you have ...

[Stella] Ouch. An Eraser nailed me in the gut and I fell a few feet as I gasped in pain. I growled and shot upwards, my fist aimed directly at ...

[Stella] Okay, I knew absolutely nothing about fighting. But I was so pissed. I wasn’t really thinking as I punched an Eraser in the face except that the sight of ...

The story itself is interesting. And I like interesting. One thing that bugged me is that I knew almost nothing of their surroundings. and the fact that I'm not even ...