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A few personal favorites from the feedbooks site: Deathworld by the mighty Harry Harrison - one of the 2-3 classical science fiction books underpinning Avatar. And another bombastic space pulp ...

Hi Idraax, I liked the overall scene quite a lot. The understated emotion, the subtle language puns. She wipes liquid up, he wipes liquid up; this has a balance, though ...

Sheesh, next thing you'll be saying imperial and rebel space fighters shouldn't make sound as they fly through space and fire laser bolts. But seriously, thanks, all this, about story ...

Thank you very much, Master Yoda, you have an eye for things undoubtedly. Just mere hours ago I was sitting on the toilet seat, leafing through a collection of Clarke's ...

Yo, this is a good intro for a story, although a bit lacking in descriptions for my taste (although lots of stellar authors like Terry Pratchett, Kevin J Anderson and ...

Can't argue with that, Master Yoda, prudent this approach is. For a second there I thought I can now upload files to this section, but no. Still, I managed to ...

A novel review of plot and tension please, much obliged: (speculative; 35K; half of story arc completed)

...That was amazingly quick!!! Perhaps even... demonically quick?! :twisted:

Excellent, thanks, Demoness!

Asking for a demonic examination here, for a demonic book. I hope it hooks you, it has space travel, conspiracies, guy on the ran, love story, and tentacles :D And ...

Really? I thought it was 45000. Huh. I think a YA 'novel' can be even around 30K. Half of Fleming's Bond books are around 50K and are certainly novels, not ...

I kinda ran out of patience here, so I'll be taking this down. In another day or two I'll be past needing the feedback on this section anyhow, that was ...

Just to add that I too felt like I was reading a story from a "famous story" collection. Bravo! One thing - when the dude discusses abortion with the brain ...

Oh my God, I love the rhythm of your poem. It never misplaces a step, and every line contains important info. It reminded me in fact of the ancient ballads ...

Hi, Locked Library, this is a very very nice story so far. The main wobbly thing I notice is the character's POV, which is very feminine, as revealed through his ...