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Hi Lavvie, thanks so much for your feedback, love your style. Feels like a young Lovecraft or Henry Kuttner has read a piece of mine in a magazine on the ...

Hi, Ziggie, thanks very much for the review. You were of assistance indeed: you validated both my hopes (of sufficiently well-crafted prose) and fears (of, as you called it, robotic ...

taken down & thanx for the feedback

“Listen,” he leaned in over her desk and pointed at her left breast, “has anyone, ever, uh…” Something like worry began to appear on Diana’s face. She leaned back as ...

Hi, BerlynnRae, This seems like a nice start of a teen adventure, possibly in a Stine vein – I can imagine ghosts and stuff. Sentences and word choices are midway ...

Taken down & thanks for the feedback

Dear Iran, The lawd knows my heart is heavy as I write these lines, but there are things which must be said. You must stop developing nuclear weapons. Only us, ...

Good grief, this has serious potential! Keep pounding away at the craft. 1. Your timeline is a bit dodgy: he kills his sister; he becomes a serial killer hermit bum, ...

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Hi, just technical feedback from me. I think you see some details as unimportant, as did I at one point, but when trying to teach oneself to write quality fiction, ...

Hi JP, good advice on the pouch; possibly I could sneak it in into the start when they are discussing whether the bush is a danger. That would be a ...

Taken down, thanks to everyone for all the feedback

Taken down, thanks to everyone for all the feedback

Update October 2011 And remember - promise yourself to write a short story or a flash every weekend - and a year from now you will be a master of ...

Warning: some of these publishers may be amateurs, servants of Cthulhu , or just jerks. Research before submitting: take a good look at the website; check if anyone has ever ...