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Re: A Soul Untouched
Hi Kayla, here are my two gallons of blood. "Declin! Get back here!" she cried as he ran towards the woods. Her voice faded as he moved farther away. The ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Empty Hours
Haha, well, almost a month later I check up on this little snippet and feel guilty for not following it with something else. I'll totally follow it up soon and ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Silent Pleas
And now: a version broken up into readable chunks:)
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: When no-one is around
And when I'm feeling slightly gay Away my angel wings, away! The vampire glitter up my nose Will help me settle in repose... Haha, this was a very inspiring poem:)
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Empty Hours
Hi Tedius, thank you for the review, and oh boy, yes, the quacking of doom! I had a similar typo the other day - to 'asses' a situation.
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Prologue & Chapter One
Hi, Laylaflame, this is a very charming story. Or, it has the potential of being a very charming story. Some sentences and paragraphs are slightly off the mark, subtly wrong ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Empty Hours
The hallway was damp, it had been mopped just minutes before I had appeared in the dark corridor. The building was closed for the night, quiet, only the humming of ...
May 23, 2011
