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LION CUB I asked Maria if she still keeps me on the shelf with the dust stacks and automobiles coffee rings and rabbit spines if she still takes me down ...

KAMAS: glad you are reading! It's been awhile NAVITA: oh shoosh. Anyway it's good to see some familiar faces. I'm getting these six done tonight I hope. DUST LOVERS IN ...

ROCKY MOUNTAIN SKETCHES it is with wicked precision that Gomez wields his motorcycle, guides it up roads lined on either side with blue spruce and aspens This is Glenwood Canyon ...

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Here is #2 THE BODIES pt. II My nose goes where the moon goes. Meaning, I am sensitive to tides and event horizons. I recognize the shapes of the barroom ...

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the can is for gas even if it was beer, I can have my characters do things that are illegal if I want! the car is actually a robot, you ...

thanks very much. the one thing I will comment on right now is that the extended metaphors you talked about are completely intentional and it is my intention to plague ...

Thanks, friends. This chapter needs a lot of work, I guess I wanted May and Tony to hang out with some people that didn't know them so as to maybe ...

smaller sections still? each part is a page, each chapter is about 4 / 5 pages. Compared to yr average novel, that's almost nothing. I'm new at formatting on this ...

CHAPTER FOUR / Iowa 1. into the steeple of beautiful people A few hours later they passed through Omaha and into Council Bluffs, Iowa. Tony expected Iowa to be similar ...

Tony opened up to her because he's incredibly lonely and she's the closest thing to a friend he's got? And he went with her because he didn't see any other ...

I'm a be hard on this The diamond girl was flawless, her form and gait pristine. God made her eyes from stars and seas, and stroked his jealousy. Nice meter, ...

CHAPTER 3 / Nebraska 1. Where do bad folks go when they die? The doors to May’s truck were open. May stood over one door, and Tony over the other. ...

This was the first story I posted on YWS when I joined, I actually joined for this story. After reading my reviews, I realized I wrote a lot of dialog ...