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Re: tapioca as a semiconducting material
there are threads, you have to find them. as always, I enjoy your honesty.
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: tapioca as a semiconducting material
TAPIOCA AS A SEMICONDUCTING MATERIAL pt 6 1 Gomez winked at me with coffee ring eyes no you cannot have any juice psychokinesis, Scully! I have been a soldier in ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Word Counts!
i'm at 13000 :-/
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: NaNoWriMo book covers
I like the second of the two for Laura. It was softer, and has a nice vintage look.
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: NaNo Playlists
my playlist for Nano is my Townes Van Zandt catalog on repeat.
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: a photo from perdido.
yeah I actually had no control over the prints this time, but next time I'm going to print them myself with an enlarger so I can fix a few of ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: a photo from perdido.
This is an image from an Occupy Wall Street march in Denver. It was captured using black and white film and my Pentax K 1000. Its composition is definitely questionable, ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?
this is my first attempt. I'm excited. I see a lot of chinese food and not very many women in my immediate future.
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Friends
it's like Dr. Seuss for mall tweens. I'm even picturing little illustrations to go with it. DON'T capitalize the first word of every line. I see you've gotten advice that ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Reason for treason
I don't like the old english. It has no place in contemporary poetry. Also I didn't like the rhyme scheme. It smothered the poem into oblivion. I mean even the ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: disco flowers
please, blame me for the creation of this monster. I woke up this morning encased in igneous rock and I've no one to pickaxe me out of it. This is ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: A Lamentation on Singlehood
I like your nonchalant style. There's a sort of inner struggle going on in this piece that made me enjoy it. I'm not sure. The whole insistence that you aren't ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: I left my path and way
i don't know. This poem is trying to be something it is not. Which is structured, metered, and rhyme schemed. All of these are inconsistent and pop in and out. ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: still, life
I read the first stanza and just said aloud, what? Then i read it aloud and I don't know. It just doesn't seem to follow. But that's okay because the ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: The Pillows
I don't know, I just don't know if chinky is an appropriate way to describe his eyes. As a story, it is so incomplete that it's almost impossible to critique. ...
Sep 14, 2011
