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  • Other Poetry Re: tapioca as a semiconducting material

    there are threads, you have to find them. as always, I enjoy your honesty.

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: tapioca as a semiconducting material

    TAPIOCA AS A SEMICONDUCTING MATERIAL pt 6 1 Gomez winked at me with coffee ring eyes no you cannot have any juice psychokinesis, Scully! I have been a soldier in ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • NovMo Archives Re: Word Counts!

    i'm at 13000 :-/

    Nov 10, 2011
  • NovMo Archives Re: NaNoWriMo book covers

    I like the second of the two for Laura. It was softer, and has a nice vintage look.

    Nov 10, 2011
  • NovMo Archives Re: NaNo Playlists

    my playlist for Nano is my Townes Van Zandt catalog on repeat.

    Nov 1, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: a photo from perdido.

    yeah I actually had no control over the prints this time, but next time I'm going to print them myself with an enlarger so I can fix a few of ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: a photo from perdido.

    This is an image from an Occupy Wall Street march in Denver. It was captured using black and white film and my Pentax K 1000. Its composition is definitely questionable, ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • NovMo Archives Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?

    this is my first attempt. I'm excited. I see a lot of chinese food and not very many women in my immediate future.

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Friends

    it's like Dr. Seuss for mall tweens. I'm even picturing little illustrations to go with it. DON'T capitalize the first word of every line. I see you've gotten advice that ...

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Reason for treason

    I don't like the old english. It has no place in contemporary poetry. Also I didn't like the rhyme scheme. It smothered the poem into oblivion. I mean even the ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: disco flowers

    please, blame me for the creation of this monster. I woke up this morning encased in igneous rock and I've no one to pickaxe me out of it. This is ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A Lamentation on Singlehood

    I like your nonchalant style. There's a sort of inner struggle going on in this piece that made me enjoy it. I'm not sure. The whole insistence that you aren't ...

    Sep 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I left my path and way

    i don't know. This poem is trying to be something it is not. Which is structured, metered, and rhyme schemed. All of these are inconsistent and pop in and out. ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: still, life

    I read the first stanza and just said aloud, what? Then i read it aloud and I don't know. It just doesn't seem to follow. But that's okay because the ...

    Sep 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Pillows

    I don't know, I just don't know if chinky is an appropriate way to describe his eyes. As a story, it is so incomplete that it's almost impossible to critique. ...

    Sep 14, 2011


A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.
— Steve Martin