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Re: The City at the End of the Hall
thanks so much guys, i really really appreciate it! this poem has special significance to me, so it really means a lot that you guys like it! i think that's ...
Dec 9, 2004 -
Re: Celebrity Crush(es)
EBM and Winter-omg! you rock my world! lol. one of you actually knows who he is! that's like...never ever happened before...i guess he's not that well known, but he's a ...
Dec 8, 2004 -
Re: Blue
boundless i think definately works better...it's still kinda off though, but i can't really figure out what it is.
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: The City at the End of the Hall
dashes! yes! lol. i completely dismissed them awhile ago. I wrote this poem this summer and i think the reason I used commas was because originally the poem didn't have ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Toys
I, personally, liked the sing songyness lol. I think it fits, even though the poem is somewhat...not so happy, because all the comparisons are toys. I think it plays into ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Good Fantasy Books
Donna Jo Napoli definately! I'd recommend Zel , Breath and Sirena by her. You might also try Robin McKinley, Spindle's End is really good. and Midnight Pearls is a retelling ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Celebrity Crush(es)
celebrity crushes...well...johnny depp has to be one, and christian bale...i doubt anyone knows who he is, but he's beautiful. and this one's a little bit young for me...actually...it's kind of ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: The Art of Being Unnoticed
mmm...i agree with teapot (can i call you that? lol) about the using similar words in the same line. plus, both of those lines kind of bored me a little. ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Alexis
A as in...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Now Accepting Submissions for YWS Webzine
would someone care to explain to penny exactly what a webzine is? please? lol
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: The City at the End of the Hall
k guys, i know it's long...but i really like it...lol. Please read it!! it wants your help desperately!! -penny The City at the End of the Hall The lights in ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Alexis
alexis...i'm sure i'd know once you told she a character from your book? is she a name for someone else...or are we really talking about an alexis here...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Salut!
Z- i have two stories posted actually, and a pseduo story. but no one is replying to them...check romance and misc. other...and i'm not sure if i liked that smilie ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Blue
oh, i love it. Your subject choice is unusually nice. You did a really nice job. You start with a description, and then the question "what is it like to ...
Dec 7, 2004 -
Re: Only Human
honey is a very nice word, i don't blame you. it's one of those words that sounds exactly like what it means. it's a very sweet and thick and sticky ...
Dec 7, 2004
