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Re: the striker project a book in the works
I would change the beginning of the chapter if I were you thats really the most important part you have to hook your readers into wnating more other then that ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Guardians chapter 1 part one Edited and extended
It was fine had alot of errors but those can always be fixed =P good luck
May 3, 2009