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not too shabs. :)

I liked it. Captures all those contradictory perceptions that come with passionate love.

Heyo Purple, I'm moved by this not only because I've dated many girls who have been raped, but also because I'm the father of a brand-new little girl, and my ...

I love this idea, and it would look great on a poster that literary students could put on their walls. I don't know much about haikus though, and have only ...

I really liked it. There are places where I wanted more description and detail. For example, I wanted to know what the cookie's voice sounded like. Very eccentric and imaginative. ...

What's good about this is that you've actually written something, and the beginning shows some promise. There are a few problems that I'll point out. It's a good story premise ...

Bullying is serious business folks. It fucks with you for the rest of your life. If you don't believe me, read on. Dear Bullies, I've come a long way since ...

I also love that he hates facebook. Enjoyed the list. :D Only critical comment about the list is that the wording in it deflates his character somewhat. His voice in ...

I loved it. Funny concept. What I don't like is how Death is indecisive about whether or not he hates these items on the list. I like his stoic/angelic character, ...

Oh! this is fantastic. I just got done editing half a short story on art, and sending it to someone here on YWS, so I think the page suggested your ...

Shring-Shring-Shring went the sound of the machete as Hank chopped his way through thick sheaves of underbrush. This wasn't the way the bushmen would do it, he thought self-consciously, though ...

I love this, Lumi. Identify with it. I'm not a well-informed critic when it comes to poetry, but I know what I like, and this seems to have guts.