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Dear Thisbookbelongsto, I was drawn to this by the title. Nice title. All in all, I thought it was great, and parts of it really drew me in the way ...

Pink, Thank you. I'm reading a book on character development right now actually, and your criticism is well-aimed. I agree, and I'll do a lot to revise this. I'm working ...

Publishable. There is potential for a timely blog.

I agree with Tori. More showy, less Telly (not the muppet). Still though, you've got the bones written down, as it were. I believe this would make a fantastic 2500 ...

Notwithstanding Octave's signature line (from On Writing, which is an excellent book on writing) This is the link I was trying to find when you logged off. Also: In places, ...

Very neat, Kamas. I have a few stories about ghosts... none written down yet. I'm not a poetry critic, but I liked this lots.

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Bravo!

It's a bit surprising that you haven't read any existentialism. Don't spend too much time on books like Being and Time or Being and Nothingness... unless you find they really ...

Very nicely-written. I'm not a Christian myself, although I do appreciate Christ and what he represents. I can be pretty cynical about Christianity, but I have to remember that there ...

Hello Kempton, I like this. I liked the imagery. Interesting that you capitalize "Being" in the phrase "Being aware." It makes me think of Heidegger's phrase Da-sein, which translates roughly ...

"Looking out the diamond-paned window on the other side of the small kitchen, I stare out into the gray blur of a snow flurry" Redundant - "Through the diamond-paned window ...

Thanks Toly, I think I can improve it by bringing it to a conclusion that resolves what I brought up in the intro. Glad you enjoyed. Pen

Dear UND Lab Inc., I bought two of your LED nightlights at the dollar store because I knew they would save me money on the power bill. They weren't 60 ...

This has immense potential, in my opinion. What I love is that you really do get into the character of this angst-ridden teen. She interprets the teacher's greeting as condescension, ...