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Re: Circumstantially Incorrect
This is the new and edited version. Thank you to all the critics! You helped a lot. Enjoy! :D I pay no attention to my surroundings as I walk through ...
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Re: Friends
I don't know what to say to this one. I guess it could be potentially dangerous but I have made friends over the internet so everyone else say what you ...
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Re: Wikipedia
I WOULD NEVER USE WIKIPEDIA AS A RELIABLE SOURCE. Wikipedia information is often distorted and incorrect. Wikipedia is open access for anyone who knows how to join it or get ...
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Re: Utterly Confused
Wow, I'm in seventh grade too. I go on to find out what people are saying! Both of you sound great. I know from experience that you, Minimal, are exceptional ...
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Re: Arguing
You, Minimal, either A) are very good at debates or B) I'm really not as good as I thought I was. Arguing and debating are two different things, and my ...
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Re: History
I'm convinced.
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Re: History
That's a very strong argument and I admire that. But what do you say about other people who are not as enthusiastic about history as you are? I know plenty ...
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Re: Arguing
For once, I see both sides of this. It can be good or bad. I actually like arguing, because it works out your brain and it is fun to hear ...
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Re: History
I have had this debate with people before. Should we really study history, when it's already passed? Even the teachers at my school have debated about it. Should history be ...
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Re: Spring is in the Air
I love these pictures. I'm not much of an artist so my critiques are less than when I am judging writing, so excuse me for saying this. I would think ...
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Re: Character Drawing
You are so amazingly lucky to have the gift of art, because trust me, if I've seen the art gift it is definitely in you! I wouldn't change a thing ...
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Re: Under the pale red sky, Part 1
I remember it was quite, no one was screaming anymore, they were done screaming, no one was crying anymore, they were done crying. No one was talking, they were too ...
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Re: Review Gallery
Welcome! What I will Review I will review any genre, except novels/ novellas. I'm not great at scripts or photography but I will try my best. How to Reply Please ...
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Re: When you look at someone, what's the first thing you notice?
I always notice if they have a certain accent or way of speaking. I also notice if they are the hugging type or the personal- space- issues type. ( I'm ...
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Re: Harshest Critiquer Survey
I only just came to YWS and I've done my best to be a good critic . I guess I'm not as good as I thought I was. In comparison ...
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