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Re: Have a Peanut!
Finished! Next? =D
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Balema, A world of many elements - Chapter 1 - The Story
Hello! =D So... yes, I agree with Snoink. I kept wondering when the story would begin. It seems like all of this is just one big confusing info. dump. Perhaps ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: 4 minutes
Hola. So the first paragraph is a major info. dump. Spread it out gradually, so it's not like; "Sothecat'snamewasMewersandshewasblackandshe'sstuckinatreeandblahblahblah..." I didn't actually find this
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hola! I'm looking for a great review and would love it if you could bump me up to the top of your list for me because I need to turn ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: A Perfect Circle
Hello all! =D I actually quite like this story, and I hope you do too. I don't mind if you rip to shreds though! ;) A Perfect Circle Cora coughed ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Finished with yours, Valentine! I loved it ;) Sorry Shubhi, but your Chapter 1 is a locked topic. I can't review it. I'm sorry D= Anyone else want a peanut? ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(4)[death]
Hola! Here to review. Sorry I'm late at reviewing this... I've been incredibly busy, and recently, sick. I'm also sorry if I repeat what some other people have said. I ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
I finished the prologue yesterday, sorry I haven't gotten to the first chapter today. I've been very busy lately.. again, I apologize. I'll get to it shortly :) ~Peanut
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Finding me back-Prologue(Final edit) Please re -read
Hola! So I'm here as requested. Pardon me if I repeat what some of the other reviewers have said here. I'll write my own and then I may read what ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Finished! :D More, please! :smt003 You know you want to ;)
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption- Redrafted
Hello! I'm here as requested. Like Amy said before me, it looks like you've got this chapter pretty well- reviewed XD I'd like to say that for some reason, the ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Cloudy Sunset (a haiku selection)
tidal waves bring in all the shells unknown to me I reach after them. I'd put a semi-colon at the end of the second line. (I like the third haiku ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Finite! Bring on some more! :D
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Hemlock
Hola! Here to review ;) Nice to see you again, Lily! First off, if you ever need help writing from a male POV, you are always welcome to PM/email me ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: You'll probably just look at this and say "great another noo
XD I like the way you let your thoughts roam free, Dragon. And it's good to check out web sites before joining them. I did that too. (: Anyway, so ...
Mar 4, 2010