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Re: Free Peanuts from the Peanut Gallery
ATTENTION: I revived my previous Review for Food thread, so please visit that one to request a review. The link is in my signature. Thank you Hello everyone! I remember ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: New Words
Well, here are a few words I use, more or less. My friends look at me weird when I do though 1. Disgustipating (adj): combination of disgusting and constipation; something ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Lost at Sea
Loved it. Gorgeous. It flowed perfectly, at least to me- I knew because I barely had to "read" it at all. It's like my mind just knew :D haha. Anyway, ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Falling in Love.....
Generally you gain experience by, well, experiencing it, witnessing it, absorbing it, licking it (kidding) etc. No one can tell you what exactly it's like to love. You have to ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Thunderstorms at home
Hola (: I love poetry and I love thunderstorms, so this was a catch! I thought it was decent but definitely needs some work. The first thing I noticed was ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Wanton
Thanks for your reviews guys :) They really helped. In answer to your questions: I have never read a poem like that, how do I follow it? Well, you can ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Wanton
I haven't been on here in a very long time and haven't posted in even longer so I sorta forgot the etiquette. This is my first two-way poem which can ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Finished with all so far! Next? =D
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: TimeKeeper
Here to review, finally. Please excuse my tardiness… I’ve been pretty busy these past few days. And as if he were Moses, everyone parted and walked away, not looking back. ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Writer's note->Hi I had posted it before but then deleted it. It's rough and needs some serious work, I know. Just tell me whether you like the story or not. ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Yours Truly
Hola =D So, you don't have to be extremely precise about capitalizing. You don't capitalize every word in a sentence do you? XD So each and every single line doesn't ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Finished! =D
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Survive: Chapter One - Genesis
Hola! It feels good to be the first to review on a story! =D I just wanted to say, if you wish to post the whole thing at one time, ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Just finished with your story, bubblegum (:
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Chapter one, part one [edited]
Hola! Peanut, here to review ^^ I’m not going to be reading the other reviews until I complete my own, so if I repeat something they already said then you ...
Mar 16, 2010
