peachygirl101

I wonder the hallways of gossip. There are words like her and he. I hear comments and opinions in the hallways and feel sorry. I know that words are like ...

My hands resting My words hiding Nothing to write Mind fighting against itself You hear the words Ringing like birds None to come out Ideas lost on a shelf Now ...

I really like this poem! It is so good! I know it has most likely taken you a very long time indeed to complete and form, but hey, it's great! ...

I really like this poem! It is so good! I know it has most likely taken you a very long time indeed to complete and form, but hey, it's great! ...

I really like this poem! It is so good! I know it has most likely taken you a very long time indeed to complete and form, but hey, it's great! ...

I really like this poem! It is so good! I know it has most likely taken you a very long time indeed to complete and form, but hey, it's great! ...

I love this!

Some might say it is a long goodbye Filled with sadness And depressed sighs All your hope is gone and passed Mourning for your love or friend But do not ...

I really like this lyric poem! It is so good! I know it has most likely taken you a very long time indeed to complete and form, but hey, it's ...

Thanks for helping me out! I will defiantly change it up a little and repost my poem!

Please review my poems, i will post more later! THANKS! :D

This was completely AHMAYZING! the lyrics are really cool and kinda explain my life. I know i am a girl, but who says girls cant be in the army?...haha yeah ...

Well you need to work on a few things like structure, spelling, grammer...and im JUST KIDDING!!!!...OMG i totally love your story so far! it is sooooo good and you are ...

This is a really good song! i really dont see any problem in it! thanks for letting me read it!

Hey i really liked your lyrics and there is really nothing i would change! you did a really good job and you dont need to be worried about the song ...