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Re: No one...
I really liked this. as soon as you start reading it you get really into it and the mood just kind of takes over. It put me in a mood ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Big City Life (3)
I really like this story! i feel like i know each character so well and get a vivid description because of the details you put in there. Im really excited ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 2
Chemistry is my favorite subject and Mr. Swagner is my favorite teacher. Normally I don’t have to make myself pay attention in this class, but I was having the hardest ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Masquerade chapter 2
Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like this one why haven't you added any more to it yet? I know that you are writing it outside of here to but I can't be there ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Repeating
Once again I found myself not knowing how to respond to you. I can remember the last time I did this, only it was much different, we were face-to-face, not ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Masquerade chapter 2
Hey you! I am not bery happy right now because i believe that you told me you just added the part where you meet me... I'm not seeing anyone named ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: My Place?
Ohhh, hannah you make me feel like I'm a horrible friend! I thought it was pretty good, you can do better but it wasn't bad because you can definitely see ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: Herself
Awwww hannah thats sad. I kinda agree that it needs a few more details though. I didn't want it to end so quickly! I liked how you used ice skating ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: chapter 1 part A
This is the same story where Jordan is in college and her crazy mom and all that right? oh wait, haha yea it is sorry brain fart. I loved it ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Masquerade chapter 2
I love it so much! I have to say though.....excuse me but I would like to be in this story too thank you very much! haha and you'd better not ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: The saving light
Please be as brutal as necessary because I am horrible at free-form poems. Suddenly I fell. Darkness came over me like a black blanket. It suffocated me. I tried to ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Can't Fly
That was not just an attempt at writing a song. That was really good! i love music and this sounds like something i would like to listen to. Keep writing ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Artist.
Wow Jade that was really pretty and very dramatic at the same time! i loved it and I actually kinda liked it being a little vague, but that's just my ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: I'm Not a 'Nobody'
I really liked this. It sounds like a song that I would buy for my ipod. Definitely keep writing lyrics because I can see that you have a lot of ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: What is Success?
I really like this one. haha apparently I'm going to need some help with getting success because this is all true but I'm not very good at believing in myself. ...
Mar 8, 2009
