patience_isnt

Thanks Cobra! I was kind of thinking that after, but you know, when a whole bunch of people get together, they tend to do crazy things that they wouldn't do ...

Okay, quite a few grammar mistakes. Try to fix them before posting, because this is something you can easily do yourself. Plus, it shows that you enjoy your piece enough ...

There's a lot of grammar problems, and I'd suggest you fix them. I'll show you what I mean with the first paragraph as an example. I'll bold what I changed, ...

I don't post there, so I wouldn't know. :D

No. Because I don't buy stuff over the internet.

Watch, because there's one in the phone. Yarr, I'm so brilliant!

As much as I can. Which is none.

I put you, because I like blaming things on other people.

I think it was pretty good, but I'm kinda confused about the three years before part. I don't really get the point of it, and if I were you, I'd ...

The result of a bad fever. I should get sick more often. Anyways, any comments would help. Thanks. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Give me one good reason why

I don't think it matters that much. If you first book is really good, than the readers will continue to read the series to see what happens next. You shouldn't ...

It looks like the two other people got you convinced not to restart it, and that's exactly what I was about to do. But yeah, that happened to me a ...

Well, first of all, you can't ask to be creative. Everyone is, and it shows in different ways. But writing better, that's an easy one. Read. I know, I know, ...

I think I'm better at discribing things. Which includes sight, touch, sounds, etc. Which sometimes I get over exagerated and over discribe everything. So maybe that's a flaw??

Another forum. I wanted to post in their writing forums, but they kinda sucked and no one was really answering anything I put in (and the only responses I was ...