parker-c-penne

Sorry folks, I've put my work in the wrong catagory again! Typical! Is it possible to move it without having to post it twice?

I spent a month working with the poor of India in November last year. O, Kaleidescope of Colour, Cacophony of sound, Will I ever forget That eastern sun Pounding the ...

There were a lot of problems with that story, and to highlight them all would be tiring. So I'm just going to say: WATCH YOUR GRAMMER and PUNCTUATION. Best selling ...

Yes, there's something ominous about this poem- hey- it got my vote!

Sitting. I liked this poem, it was short, simplistic and meaningful and the measure was spot on. Quatraine, Cinquaine or whatever other aine there is poems usually don't appeal to ...

I liked it!

It was good. Yeah I liked it. But I think a couple of lines could be fixed, its no big deal. Well done.

Yeah I liked it. Couple of things that need to be untangled but it makes for some easy reading. Well done.

This is a draft, so please point out punctuation and spelling errors if you come across them. PART I Subsequent to the foundation of the Irish Free State in 1921, ...

I'm Irish and partial to drink- so one could argue that I am the stereotypical Irish man- without the beer belly and the Leprechaun accent. Essentially I am, what I ...

Well, too be honest, I think that the details are key to this poems overall effect. A poem is an expression so let it be one, why hide things from ...

I caught this fish. Glimmering, Silver Soldier Of the Sea. And laid it by my side. Ripped the hook From it's nose. The tear of raw flesh And a spill ...

I have killed in my life. I've seen murder and I've grown to accept it. My eye's are stained by the wounds of other men. Am I a monster, A ...

Also, i accidentally inserted this into the "other fiction" section, and I'm going to move it ASAP!

This is a poem, a narrative style unique to most Irish poets like John Montague and Derek Mahon. The language is accesible and in most cases a story is being ...