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Re: Among The Weak Chapter One
Hi there! I'm Pari. :D So this is a little confusing. I think you should establish the MC a little better. We know absolutely nothing about her at this point ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: I think you should let me review your work. :)
There's really nothing for me to submit right now, but I recently discovered a love for critiquing, not least of all because I know that critiques can be story-saving sometimes. ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 2}
Hi!(: I know there's a part one, and I read it, so don't worry about that. Um... the wound, did she get injured in the previous fight? I didn't see ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Her stolen life
Hi there(: Alright, firstly, I like the story. The plot is interesting and the idea is a good one; it's emotional and sweet. But there's a major problem: it's moving ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi everyone, I'm Pari(: I don't usually post an introduction if I join a forum or something - I guess I'm a bit too shy. But I've been lurking, and ...
Jan 4, 2011