parigirle

Haha, that's the second time someone's mentioned that. I'm not sure what work both of you were talking about, but I guess I'm more cliched than I originally thought! :P ...

Hi again! The spoiler is a nitpick, although I probably missed some mistakes near the end. I lose steam after a couple of paragraphs. :p Ava and Kevin stood in ...

Hi there! (: Um... well, I honestly don't have much to complain about with this. xD Your voice is really distinctive and still literary at the same time. I find ...

Sorry, I was busy yesterday - I'll get on that right now(:

First of all, kudos for even trying. :D 60 words is really hard. Alone at Last - This is good. The theme is great ; how many times have you ...

Hi there! I'm Pari(: The spoiler is a full nitpick. Night falls and the sky covers the surroundings in a blanket of ice cold snow. I find the last three ...

Hi, I'm hoping to ask for a review on the first part of my general fiction novel: Some of the later parts might be a teensy bit gory, as there ...

Hi, I was hoping to request a review on the first part of my novel - it's general fiction. There's nothing explicit in it, although it has a medical aspect ...

Actually, the name is temporary. I tried out a bunch and nothing is sticking yet, so I just put his name since 'Unnamed' just sounded kind of stupid. XD I'm ...

Hi there! First, I'll start by saying that though this chapter is short, I like it. This is the pace your story should stay at. Before anything, spelling&grammar nitpicks for ...

Hi, I'd love a review on the first part of my general fiction novel{la}: It's not rated 18+... it has a medical aspect, but it's not overly gory or anything. ...

Hey guys! So this is the first thing I've posted here... I would very much appreciate any and all critiques, opinions, and whatnot. Please, be as harsh as you can. ...

Hi, I know this is a) an old piece, b) already submitted, and c) already has reviews, so there's really nothing for me to say. But - I read this ...

Taylor - done :)

Hi (: It's Pari, here to review like you asked~ The spoiler is a total nitpick. Anna Trueman sat awkwardly beside me outside Room 239, quietly sobbing. I glanced at ...