paraperson

This was unbelievably moving. It was, really! I mean, I was four years old when 9/11 happened, and I have almost no real emotional connection to that date, but I ...

*WARNING* This chapter has some gore-y details, so if you have a weak stomach, I suggest you turn around now and read something else. Right, now that that's out of ...

*WARNING* This chapter has some gore-y details, so if you have a weak stomach, I suggest you turn around now and read something else. Right, now that that's out of ...

That was a great ending! I totally did not expect it to end the way it did and really, I'd be delighted if you continued on from here because I ...

Whoa! You've got a a very intriguing plot going on! I think your story has a feeling that's slightly creepy which I love. You use a lot of description, which ...

Chapter Two “May the ancestors bring harmony and love to the Sparks family and bless them with all that is good in the world. May the Sparks family find favor ...

Hello! I'm not really a short story writer, but I'll do my best to review this anyway as a reader. Overall, I think it's a really neat little piece with ...

Hey there! I've been reading and unable to stop since I started chapter one! The only issue I have is a few grammatical errors, but other than that I really ...

Hi there! You've got a lot of action going on, which is great, but I think there's a little too much action and not enough description. I think the pacing ...

Wow! You've got me pulled in and wanting more! Very nice adjectives, sounds like you've got a really good plot planned out. You've got some great ideas flowing with Kitten ...

Chapter One There’s only five of us. Five people turning sixteen in the village: me, Malice, Piper, Ivy, and Weed. I throw a glance at Piper and scowled. She caught ...