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I'm trying to think of him as an addict who blows up. Like Jack in "The Shining"? And he's too eager to put the blame on himself, I think.

Not necessarily a bad idea: it'll lighten a little the plot, but i liked the interactions between Edna, Kiernan and Ben.

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Hi, here I am, back again to review a couple of chapters. I intended to review only chapter 44 originally, but then, I was going to stick to the same ...

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Hi, another short review, this one for chapter 41. Let me start out with a nitpick, because it’s really tiny, and it’s pretty much the only one: I don’t like ...

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Hi again, chapter 40 now. It’s a short review because I didn’t have that much to say. Perfect transition from chapter 39. Talk about Clem, then, bam, see Clem. And ...

Sorry, I've been very busy. I've been keeping up with the story. I'll try to review this chapter and the ones before this weekend. I've got mostly good things to ...

Thanks, Biscuits. Sorry for the long delay to reply, I was busy with administrative BS. I really like Graves too, which might be why I'm guilty of engineering reasons to ...

Thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too.

Thank you, I will. I'm revising a little before I go on, but the rest of the story is getting out there soon.

Thanks for the review. Yep, I see what you mean by it sounding odd. In the circumstances, it's not actually that jarring because Mike has been begging her to help ...

Thanks for the review, Rosette. Glad you enjoy this chapter. I hope you'll give a chance to other chapters and maybe like them. I don't know about the children's menu ...

Thanks. Until tomorrow, then.

It really helps to have someone read me. I'm seeing a lot of things I didn't before. I still think I need to take a little time and work on ...

I see. I'll have to think again about how I bring up her backstory because it's clearly not clear :p The way I saw it, she had her first Trance ...

It must be intense, considering how intense it got for us when it wasn't even graded. Mmm...