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Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 17.1 - Something Good
I know. I'm not happy at all about this chapter. It doesn't feel right and it's too long, I had to cut it in three. Pff...
Sep 6, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
Practice. I'm still new to writing in English but it's something I've been doing in French for a long time. I've found that it helps pacing my story. Plus, I ...
Sep 3, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
Don't worry, I'm in no hurry. I'm working on another story myself so I'll wait a little, gather all the reviews I've got so far and spend two days straight ...
Sep 3, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
Thank you. It does. Have a good day.
Sep 2, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
Like a really disgusting wound you can't help poking at?
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
Thank you for taking the time to go through the chapter with a fine comb. It's very useful. I know I need to work on my descriptions. It's not my ...
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (Epilogue)
I wouldn't call it 'romanticizing'. It's not like you dumped a Greek billionaire between one trashcan and the next. Everything you make happen COULD happen. Sadly, other things could happen ...
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (20.0)
You are welcome. It's a great dream. I hope you'll get there one day soon.
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (17.2)
It didn't bother me too much. It's just part of her character for me: weird thought processes.
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 15.2 - Stars in the Lockit Galaxy (seven years ago)
Lucky you. WE only get a say every 5 years for everyone.
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 15.2 - Stars in the Lockit Galaxy (seven years ago)
Yeah, I'm familiar with the feeling. Only four years and a bit left. Good luck.
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
Don't worry.
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 16 - Settling scores
Where is the grammatical error, please? I've read every chapter over and over so I can't see them anymore.
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 15.2 - Stars in the Lockit Galaxy (seven years ago)
I'll be posting again this week. Thank you for another review, BlueAfrica. I'm trying to write but I've got the American news on 24/7 because I'm becoming kind of fascinated ...
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 15.2 - Stars in the Lockit Galaxy (seven years ago)
I'll look into it. Thank you, Kyllorac.
Aug 28, 2017
