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23.1 and 23.2 together, as usual. I had an issue with this chapter. Edna is obviously very worried about Amir. I get that. And she is understandably worried about the ...

Okay, I’ve got no issues with the long sentences in the beginning. I do, however, have a couple of questions. 1. “It was […] unlikely to be disturbed” -> I’m ...

Hi, I'm going to review 21.1 and 21.2 together, as usual. First, I don't think Edna worries too much about naming the carpet. Nothing silly about thinking about it over ...

Hi, I'm going to review 20.1 and 20.2 together. I'm sorry, my reviews were messy to begin with and they're getting worse because it's getting late and I'm tired. First ...

Hi, since chapter 19.1 ends up a little abruptly, I decided to review it together with chapter 19.2. I've got no critic, just nitpicking (I love this word). My general ...

Hi, here's my review for chapter 18.2 (what's left after my review of chapter 18.1, anyway). « In the movies, when someone dies, there is always a last moment when a ...

Reviewing Chapter 18.1 (and a tiny bit of 18.2 too). Honestly, I didn't read this chapter like an infodump. We've got to get insight into our characters' past and, sometimes, ...

Hi, here's my review for chapter 17. It was very nice to hear Kiernan's voice again. I'd like to get more chapters with him as the narrator. Edna's nice and ...

Hi, I'm back for a review of chapter 16.2. First of all, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed the chapter. I especially liked Kiernan's introduction to our main ...

Hi, BlueAfrica, second batch of reviewing for today. I hope you won't mind : it's a little messy. I just jotted this down as I read parts 15.1, 15.2 and 16.1. ...

Hi, BlueAfrica, I'm only now catching up with the latest chapters and I'll, as usual, review them by batches. This review is for parts 14.1 and 14.2. General impressions : First ...

Hi, Carlito. So it'll be my last review on Zac and Liz. I'm actually a little sad. I must be an horribly pessimistic person because, until Zac saw Liz and ...

Hi, Carlito. Another review while I'm still catching up, this one for parts 19.1, 19.2 and 20 (I want to do a separate one for the epilogue). About part 19.1, ...

Hi, Carlito. As usual, it's a review for parts 18.1 and 18.2. First of, I'm getting worried about Cherry. It sounds like small time cyclothymia and, considering her family's medical ...

Another review, this one for chapters 17.1 and 17.2. 17.1 It's just right that Zac wouldn't look happy. Obviously, he'd have spent the entire time since their fight worrying about ...