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Hi, I’m sorry you’re feeling down. You mentioned being sick, so I hope you recover soon. It sucks, especially if you've got the same weather we do. It's a shame ...

Hi, here is just a brief review. I hope it helps. First, I really enjoyed the tone of the story, but I think it’s too bad you used the present. ...

Hi, me again. Okay, the pacing in this chapter was just perfect. You got everything you needed in it and, then, you wrapped it up smoothly with « “I remember ...

Hi, I like this chapter. The action is picking up. Monica's character is already pretty interesting. Yes, she sneaks up on Edna and attacks her, but she also apologizes, which ...

I hope this review is useful, even though I don't have all that much to say. It was another slow chapter, but it was fun to see Edna scrambling without ...

It was a slow chapter, yes, but I’m guessing 31.1 and 31.2 go together, so, in the end-format, it would be only one slow chapter. Plus, if you put the ...

First things first, I feel so vindicated. Dan is so suspicious! Why can’t they see that? If you want my opinion, that’s what they should be talking about when they’re ...

Wowwwwww... Fan-note: I had a crazy idea reading this chapter. Red couldn't be Edna's son, returned from the dead, could he? That would be disturbing. I've got to read again ...

Hi, here is my review. This first chapter was very short but that’s not necessarily bad. I understand why you would divide it in three paragraphs, but it would be ...

Hi, I don’t have much to say in this review. Not much happened, except that Clem definitely has a thing for Jada. I do wonder if the other girl feels ...

First, I have a few remarks about the way the story is going. Then, I've got something to say about the writing. I really thought Dan had been roped into ...

Okay, here comes the review. It's not how I've always imagined California either. I didn't think mist was even ALLOWED there. Isn't it supposed to be sunny, like, all the ...

Ooooooh, nooooo... I already felt sorry for the dragon. You really didn't have to do that to my heart. Now, I'm falling back in love with Kiernan. On one hand, ...

I knew there was a reason why I liked the captain guy! It was funny how he changed the moment the dragon was gone and he recognized Marisol's sister. I ...

That’s my review for 24.1 and 24.2. I didn’t like this chapter at all, mostly because of Clem. I get that she tends to do stupid things whenever dragons come ...