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Awesome! I'm sick of seeing stupid fantasies about romantic and oh-so-selfless vampires! I love you for this! *ahem* Anyway. I couldn't help thinking that the narrating character was a woman. ...

Hello! Interesting story! This was one that I didn't feel the need to skip over! I'm glad you didn't mention anything unnecessary in your story, that's one thing. A few ...

This is only a test. I'd like some input on whether or not I should continue this story. Here's what I've written so far. Chapter I: The Hunting Party Eldron ...

Hey newb who is not as much as a noob as me but is still a newb! I'm BOB! But not really... So first of, I have seen SO many ...

Hey, this is amazing! So, here's the deal. I hate Maurice, but I hate her in a good way. She seems slightly... off her rocker. A bit paranoid and/or crazy. ...

Hello, fellow newb! Your story is very fast paced. I like that! Something, however, reminds me of playing the introduction quests of an Undead in World of Warcraft... *waves hand ...

Hello friend! Good to see another newb like me! Just to agree with the two good chaps above me, I like your J.R.R Tolkien approach to telling a myth, but... ...

Who was the first one to ever ask Why? The first mortal the question or doubt? Whoever he was, was a fool Or incredibly adept, but how should I know? ...