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I love how you turn ordinary things into cool pictures like this. I respect someone who can do that. I'm only starting out in photography at the moment, so I ...

Thanks, guys. Edited.

The road, the sky, the trees and the buildings Rising all around me, and I can't see How life could be Without you. They hold us down, and make us ...

Ooooh! I like the last line! Reminds me of Macbeth, with the "Out damn spot!" bit. Love it! Heheheh... Sorry about that. I like Shakespeare. :P Soooo I'm not really ...

Edited. Thanks for the review! Now I'll review something of your's! :)

Wow. SO much better :P Thanks for taking the time to read through my review. Would you mind PMing me when you put up the next chapter? That is, IF ...

Hello grigoris! Welcome to YWS! My comments in green. Grammar mistakes in bold. "I had to do it... I had no other option ," said J essu while walking in ...

Double post XD

For some reason I can't indent paragraphs. :? Help?

Part of this is a rewrite from "The Thunderbolt Chronicles" I did. You can find that in the Fantasy Fiction short story section. Prologue Eldron knelt down by the side ...

That was... strange. Sorry, I don't exactly understand what's going on in this story... Maybe if it were longer, or I knew some background to it that would help. Or ...

comments in green A lonesome balloon floated down steadily in the dark of night. Its bright yellow exterior glowing brightly you already mentioned the balloon was bright against the dreary, ...

Hello, BlanchKe. I'm papersolstice. Nice to meet you. Hmmm... An interesting story. I would agree with Mr.Knightley that this doesn't really belong in Fantasy, but I trust that it will ...

I didn't know if I was supposed to put this in Action/Adventure or Fantasy. It was originally supposed to be horror, but this site doesn't seem to have a horror ...

comment are in bold When the dragons flew, this country had a heart. She was never led astray and always did what was right for herself and her people, for ...