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A bare skeleton. Just a babe in creation. Slowly smothered with ribbons and scarves. With unnecessary flourishes and marks. Dot the 'i's and cross the "t's. A tragedy in modesty. ...

It's interesting and very humorous. I could imagine this happening in a bakery (though not like we would know it.) I love that you gave the cupcakes and cookies their ...

This seriously left chills running down my spine. I knew it was figurative from the very beginning, but the imagery left me breathless. It is truly amazing. It kept me ...

As Joyce said, you need to work on your punctuation as well as your capatilization. However, forget the technical things. This is an interesting plot. I like the fact that ...

As Joyce said, you need to work on your punctuation as well as your capatilization. However, forget the technical things. This is an interesting plot. I like the fact that ...

Rather interesting, very interesting in fact. I'm not quite sure if I interpreted it right, but each to his own, correct? Anyway the technical thing I found was Their voices ...

Heehee I feel this way about my sister...and I'm the older one haha. This is a nice poem and I'm glad that it's short and to the point. I would ...

Powdered faces and painted lips. Bows rising and falling, with the breaths of their dancers. Fingers scatter across, obeying the dip and pull of horsehair. The music soars through the ...

When I was younger, I felt dead inside. My heart was breaking, as surely as my mother's was. Daddy didn't want to stay with us, and it was my fault. ...

A/N: This is a four by four (four poems by four lines) and so it seemed like a waste to put them all seperately, so it is a four by ...

I suppose that I should be glad that I screwed up my entire plot? Haha, thanks for the tips though!

Interesting and very inspirational. I'm glad it's put in other because it really deserves that. I am actually going through a tough time right now and it does feel like ...

Smile. Through the tears. Through the lies. Smile. Through the fear. Through the sighs. Smile. Through the hate. Though it's fake. Smile. There are better days. You want to scream. ...

Do you see a smile behind those blue eyes? I don't and I'm her creator. She looks away, that dreaming look appears. Her heart wants, needs, lusts for her own ...

I understand the simplistic style, however I also feel that the rhymes are unnecessary and really hold back the feeling of the poem. It's personal and you feel a lot ...