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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Reflection

    How long have you been asleep? What time was it? The red glare of the clock blinks 7:42. You groan. You are late for "work," as you call it. You ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1

    okay it grabbed my attention. there were some odd places though and i find it odd that the main character would sympathize with Nico so quickly. That was a little ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1

    okay it grabbed my attention. there were some odd places though and i find it odd that the main character would sympathize with Nico so quickly. That was a little ...

    Dec 23, 2010


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