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I didn't like it. It was...kind of...blah. There wasn't any emotions in it. I don't feel the love, I just felt the teenage obsession to be with a boy. I ...

A small letter. Feedback would be nice. The gardener usually trimmed the bushes every Wednesday, but since he was going to be out of town all that week he would ...

A small letter. Feedback would be nice. The gardener usually trimmed the bushes every Wednesday, but since he was going to be out of town all that week he would ...

Well this would be a great romantic story. I would make the entries longer and definitely show the girl's true feelings. Make sure to be realistic and include what a ...

Okay it was very beautiful and touching. For a 1000 word competition, it was very good. I didn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes, so I'll skip that. I think ...

~Keeley~ Oh hell no. This was not happening. She stared at herself in the mirror and poked the fangs. One minute she was an angel, the next she was a ...

It was pretty fast paced, but in this chapter it worked well. I didn't find many things wrong with this, except Guinivere annoys me to no end. She reminds of ...

Okay this is not for you literal poets. If I get told to clarify what I am talking about, I might scream. This is for the reader's interpretation. (Written on ...

Daymion- He stares in shock as the demon roars through the bathroom. When it smashes the mirror, he comes back to his senses. Without even grabbing a towel, he runs ...

READ BEFORE READING STORY!!!! Okay so this will be very graphic. It will include murder, angst, anger, blood, love/lust (not sure), crazy people, and of course lots of dead bodies. ...

1.) Are you out of your mind? Yes! I want to know more. I want to know more now!! 2.) I love the description. It wasn't too much or too ...

I like the fire in your writing. I feel like I can hear your voice yelling at people to get motivated. However I have no clue what Nigerians have been ...

It's witty and simple, which is what I love in a poem! I loved "The Earl was drunk." That line made me laugh. This really isn't much of a review ...

Oops! Sorry I meant Persephoneia! Again, I'm sorry for that typo!

I think I may have the wrong meaning out of the poem...but I'm sticking with it. The rhyme scheme was off, but I didn't notice until I read wewinwelose's review. ...